Wikipedia:Peer review/Citybus Route 12A/archive1

Citybus Route 12A

I've listed this article for peer review because I hope to potentially improve this to GA status, and would also like some advice on how to expand the relatively short lead section.

Thanks, S5A-0043🚎^{(Leave a message here)} 08:18, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The Central terminus was shifted twice: I recommend "The Central terminus was relocated twice".
...while some passengers were unable to get on the bus due to it being full, most were able to board the second bus seven minutes later: can be "while some passengers could not board the first bus due to full capacity, all waiting passengers were able to board the subsequent bus 7 minutes later" to clarify what the second bus is.
bus drivers with CMB went on strike: Does it refer to bus drivers (working under) CMB?
I recommend adding translations in sources
(This is optional) Is there a map that places the bus route variants on a map of Hong Kong Island?

For the lead, I recommend adding the reasons why the route was suspended (if it's declining management and mismanagement) and its reintroduction. RFNirmala (talk) 08:02, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Done with most parts except the source translations (quite a headache so I'll do it later when I have more free time). For the map I originally did try to overlay the routes on OSM but they couldn't match no matter what so I just put a white background, but maybe someone at WP:GLI could do a better job than me at that. S5A-0043🚎^{(Leave a message here)} 14:19, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]