Wikipedia:Featured article review/Kingdom Hearts/archive1
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- Notified: WikiProject Video games, WikiProject Square Enix, Favre1fan93, SubZeroSilver, Guyinblack25
I am nominating this featured article for review because...The media section wasn't written to a prose style, but as a list of each of its games, + the usage of a lot of unreliable/low quality/primary sources (Square Enix and random sources citing the devs' info) instead of secondary sources that exist. The media section was also written in lists instead of prose style. Additionally, the story section was incomplete and has an active tag template that is getting too long. There are plenty of unsourced statements, such as at the Gameplay section. The reception section was mostly written about KH being included in the rankings/listicles, which is trivia and irrelevant to readers. It should be rewritten entirely. What makes NAG and GamingDead reliable? There is also usage of low quality and out of place sources such as Twitter/X. Overall, the article obviously is in bad shape. 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 08:31, 12 March 2025 (UTC)
- Boneless Pizza!, I believe this is your sixth open FAR (after Tasha Yar, Homer Simpson, Hydrogen, Edgar Allan Poe, and Goblin shark); do you have permission from the coords? Thanks, ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 13:47, 13 March 2025 (UTC)
- Oops, I didn't. I thought the requirements for us to do FAR is to open them once for week only. I apologize about that. Pinging @FAR coordinators: 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 17:09, 13 March 2025 (UTC)
- Fine for this to proceed, but mind the limit in future plz. Nikkimaria (talk) 14:42, 15 March 2025 (UTC)
I was one of the main contributors to the article when it passed its FAC in 2007. The assessment above looks pretty accurate; although I'm not sure if this needs to be closed or temporarily on hold for procedural reasons. Pending what the FAR coordinators say, this article should be reviewed and fixed at some point. I'm not sure how much I can help with clean up (looks like it'll be a big task), but I'll see what I can do. Any and all help would be appreciated. (Guyinblack25 talk 20:20, 13 March 2025 (UTC))