Talk:Palau at the 2024 Summer Olympics/GA1

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Nominator: Arconning (talk · contribs) 14:36, 9 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: History6042 (talk · contribs) 12:08, 24 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I will do this for WP:GARC. History6042😊 (Contact me) 12:20, 25 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I will start the review tonight in Eastern Standard Time. History6042😊 (Contact me) 12:20, 25 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Arconning, I have posted comments. History6042😊 (Contact me) 01:16, 26 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@History6042 I believe I'm done. For the training part, I believe the only parts would be their training locations and the included tidbits of Yuri finding out she and her brother qualified for the games in a restaurant. Arconning (talk) 02:40, 26 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, I will check off enough detail. History6042😊 (Contact me) 11:56, 26 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

And the others. History6042😊 (Contact me) 11:56, 26 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Arconning, now just neutrality checking and we will be done. History6042😊 (Contact me) 11:58, 26 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I will pass the article. History6042😊 (Contact me) 12:07, 26 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I will start reviewing now. History6042😊 (Contact me) 01:04, 26 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• Earwig found no issues.
• Source 2
  • It does not state that the 2024 Games were the fourth of Palau, they are the seventh. N
• Source 5
  • States where the camp is and who went. Y
• Source 8
  • No issues here. Y
• Source 10
  • States the closing flagbearers. Y

• When the siblings are mention together I thiink it should be "Jion and Yuri Hosei" not "Jion Hosei and Yuri Hosei".
• "the opening ceremony, Jion and Yuri were the flagbearers" -> "the opening ceremony, and Jion and Yuri were the flagbearers"
• I think "the games" should always be capitalized.
• "and to develop sports diplomacy." -> "and develop sports diplomacy."
• "qualified for the games, sprinter" -> "qualified for the games: sprinter"
• "her mother then Leanne Hines-Smith" -> "her mother, and then Leanne Hines-Smith"
• "alongside with Steven Abraham" -> "with Steven Abraham"
• "Gold Coast then went to a training camp" -> "Gold Coast, and then went to a training camp"
• "and traded pins" -> "and trading pins"
• "where they were the first siblings" -> "who were the first siblings"
• "though finished with a time not fast enough to progress to later rounds" -> "though he finished with a time not fast enough to progress to later rounds"
• "she felt encouragement" -> "she felt encouraged"

• Is there any detail about what happened during training, any notable times or anything like a personal best while training?

• No image issues, all are usable and have good captions.
• You are really the only recent editor so no stability issues there.
• No neutrality issues.

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed